My Experience in Studying Writing
Paragraph writing is one of the subjects that must be taken in the second semester. I think it was just a lesson to train us in writing. At the beginning, I thought paragraph writing was not difficult, but actually it is very difficult.
There are experiences in studying writing last semester.
My experience in the last semester was I could not make a paragraph writing. There were many mistakes in my writing, such as coherence, grammatical, and punctuation. So that, I asked my friend to checked my writing. After I knew about my mistakes, I tried to make a new paragraph.
The first time when I wrote the paragraph, I thought about the topic and the ideas that I wanted to write. Then, I started make a sentence of the topic sentence. After that, I began expand the topic and made the supporting sentences. I also made conclusion in final paragraph. After I finished make a paragraph, I checked what I had made before and I gave it to my lecturer. When my lecturer gave it back to me, I got the good result.
In the end, when I did final examination. I could understand about the grammatical, coherence, and punctuation in writing. So that, I finished my writing perfectly. I was happy because I passed paragraph writing course last semester.
There are experiences in studying writing last semester.
My experience in the last semester was I could not make a paragraph writing. There were many mistakes in my writing, such as coherence, grammatical, and punctuation. So that, I asked my friend to checked my writing. After I knew about my mistakes, I tried to make a new paragraph.
The first time when I wrote the paragraph, I thought about the topic and the ideas that I wanted to write. Then, I started make a sentence of the topic sentence. After that, I began expand the topic and made the supporting sentences. I also made conclusion in final paragraph. After I finished make a paragraph, I checked what I had made before and I gave it to my lecturer. When my lecturer gave it back to me, I got the good result.
In the end, when I did final examination. I could understand about the grammatical, coherence, and punctuation in writing. So that, I finished my writing perfectly. I was happy because I passed paragraph writing course last semester.
You should expand your ideas in your essay, and please find other vocabularies that has same meaning, so your vocab will be improved.
BalasHapusplease make the first and the conclusion longer. you need to expand your essay.
BalasHapusjust improve your vocab. so far so good
BalasHapusIt's still too short. Come on you have to be serious in writing your essay.
BalasHapusgreat! keep practice
BalasHapusIt's a good essay, but you have to develop more.
BalasHapusYou need to develop your essay, dear... Keep spirit! ;)
BalasHapusOk, thank you dear :)
HapusYou need to elaborate your essay more.. please improve your skills in writing. Be serious, dear. Writing gives a lot of advantages to you.
BalasHapusThank you Mia :)
Hapusdevelop your essay Put..
BalasHapusadd some sentences to make it longer. :)
Putri, I love your experiences. But, it's better for you to make longer your conclusion paragraph :D
BalasHapusKeep writing :D
Thank you so much Manisa :)
Hapusdevelop your ideas,,
BalasHapuselaborate your each paragraph..
BalasHapusadd more sentences to elaborate your idea in your esay.
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