The benefits of Studying Writing
Writing is one of the most important things you do in the college. Writing can build my skills to write on the paper. Writing can help me to expand some ideas to be a sentence and paragraph. So that, I can expressing something in my mind. I need to study writing because it has many benefits in my life. There are several benefits of studying writing.
Firstly, I can develop my skills in English. I can expand all of the ideas that I have. Then, I can publish my writing in social media. I can make more than one thousand words every day. It is so important to our life to be creative.
Secondly, I can learn how to make a good sentence and paragraph. I can deepen my grammer because I need the grammatical correctly in writing. So that, When I want to write a thesis or a paper, I can do it.
Finally, studying writing have benefits for my future. By studying writing, I can get a good job in my future because I have good skills in writing.
Please make your essay longer and develop your idea well into each paragraph. So your essay will be better.
BalasHapuschange the title, expand the paragraph. give some extra information.
BalasHapusyou need more sentence for each paragraph
BalasHapusExpand your idea for each paragraph. It's just extremely short.
BalasHapusplease, develop your idea and add more supporting details.
BalasHapusJust make it longer, Ms. Putri Nanda Laina........... ;;)
BalasHapusWoow.. your essay is too short. It seems like you lack of ideas. Make it more longer. You need to add some supporting details.
BalasHapusGood ideas putri, but your essay too short :) Make it longer your essay. Keep wrting :D
BalasHapusI like your idea, put. But your essay to short :D
BalasHapusAdd your paragraph to make it more longer. it's too short. Pay attention to your punctuation too.
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