The Effort that I am going to Do to Pass in Essay Writing

          Essay writing is more difficult than paragraph writing. I will be studying essay writing with Mr. Anshar and Ms. Lina. I hope that I can pass this course. I want to get the higher score than last semester. There are several efforts that I am going to do to pass in essay writing.
          First, I will focus when studying essay writing in the class. I will listen carefully when the lecturer explaining the lesson. I will be active in the class. I will raise my hand if I know about the answer's question from the lecturer.
I will study make a new paragraph every day. I will correct my mistakes in my writing, such as coherence, grammatical, and punctuation. I will be diligent to write my ideas on the paper, so it can makes me habitual in writing.
          Finally, I will do exercise every day. I will do my assignment and collect my assignment on time. I will do anything to pass this course and get the high score.

Komentar

  1. Your title is too long and not interesting. Make it simple and can get attention readers.

    BalasHapus
  2. putri ga niat bikin essay? -_- please improve your essay into a good one.

    BalasHapus
  3. your essay too short. make it longer.

    BalasHapus
  4. Make it looooooooooooooonger hahahaa. Please be serious put .______.

    BalasHapus
  5. Putri, were you in a bad mood when you wrote your essay? it's too short, put.

    BalasHapus
  6. Wow! How short your essay,baby!! :P
    I think it's clear, but you have to improve more. Don't be lazy in writing,please:(

    BalasHapus
  7. Hey putry.. why is your essay too short?? You need to add one or two paragraphs in your body paragraph. Please improve your essay..

    BalasHapus
  8. ooooww.....only 3th paragraph ??
    I suggest you to add some paragraph on your essay Putri..
    make it LONGER.. :)

    BalasHapus
  9. Good ideas put, but your essay too short. I suggest you to make it longer your essay. Keep writing putttttt :D

    BalasHapus
  10. Your essay is too short. add more idea. I can not find your topic sentences. Make it more interesting ! add ideas :)

    BalasHapus

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